Today I read my 9/10 girls Frost's "Neither Far Out Nor In Deep." I was thinking how powerfully the most unremarkable, in fact rarely marked and nearly subliminal perceptions can resonate if we just manage to train a little attention on them. We talked about this for a few minutes, and I mentioned that I'd once written a poem about standing on one foot in the ocean and not being able to bring myself to put the other foot down. Zahava said she'd felt the same thing, the same sudden and ridiculous fear of the unknown sea floor. Anyway, here's Frost's poem and two of mine, poems about almost nothing -- staring out to sea, standing on one foot in the ocean, watching a sailboat cross a lake. It's interesting how they all involve water and a certain state of absent-minded concentration...
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At noon there's a hot white sun,
not large, but damaging.
And then: the warped
colorless air, the water
flying from every dizzy surface,
children racing like molecules
in a heat-crazed gas.
A hum composed of light
has settled everywhere
on your indefensible body
so that you stand in the ocean
on a single foot, in a cold sweat,
shoulders unhappily hunched.
The other foot will not go down.
It is frightened and desirous
and will not go down.
The Sailboat
It first appears
bent forward into wind,
triangle of white
slipping from between the mainland shore
and one green island.
It makes a kind of theater
in the narrow band of air
between lake's brim
and low sky burdened with rain.
There's nothing else for me to do,
sitting on this rock,
but watch the white sail mark and leave me,
mark the basin of the lake and glide away,
first taking everything,
then nothing,
with it.